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So I'm working on this novel (and have been working on it since early 2003) and I'm finally ready to show off some of the writing associated.

Constructive Crit is more than welcome, I need help pointing out flaws. :catfish:

You can read on the site @ http://sessions-st.net/tigergirl
Or pick the individual chapter PDFs
01 - http://sessions-st.net/stash/Tiger Girl - Chapter One.pdf
02 - http://sessions-st.net/stash/Tiger Girl - Chapter Two.pdf
03 - http://sessions-st.net/stash/Tiger Girl - Chapter Three.pdf

Full information site is being reworked and is visible at http://tigergirl.end-day.net
 
Wow you sure you've been working on this novel since 2003? Sounds neat, I will read them all when I have time. I've eyed a few paragraphs and they look awesome so far.
 
I have a suggestion from someone who's been there; posting links on a site like this is fine, but if you have any networking/social media outlets like Facebook, etc., use that to link up with other writers, ideally someone who's already published, and see if you can trade editing services. Seriously, professional or quasi-professional editing is a MUST for anyone who wants to write, but the skills of an editor and those of a writer overlap a lot and it's not necessary to pay for editing if you network it right.
 
Wow, to work on something that long, you have true dedication! I'll be sure to read more of it, and it's pretty great so far.
 
Bumping this to showcase the new site(s)...
Tumblr Hub (Each character has/will have their own page, so far the following characters have tumblrs: Kaitlin, Griever, Amiko, and Kona).
Official Website

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Destined Stars was originally going to be a 2500 word short story called "Tiger Girl, until it took on a life of it’s own. Very little has changed plot wise, and a lot of information and filler has been added. It is on it's second full re-write as I have further fleshed out characters, plot, places, history, and much more.

Destined Stars starts in a small town in California, and from there journeys to Tokyo, Japan. Kaitlin and Griever do their best to uncover the truth about what is tearing the clans apart, trying to save their families and theirselves along the way.

Destined Stars takes place in an alternate universe, some similarites will exist between our timeline and the timeline of the story.

fictionpress.com description
She is almost the last of her kind. He is a warrior from a large family. Together they must protect each other from the pain and pleasure of being different.

Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Action/Adventure/Romance
 
Oh the new site looks really nice, its indeed been a while since you last posted an original fiction Tequila.
 

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